Monday, September 29, 2008
I read a notice very good that was about a huracane that destroy many countries I like very much that notice it was very interesting I like it very much.It was very amasing I like it very much.You have to read it is so great.It was in Bejing and the photo that is there is very good .You have to see it.Many people have to evacuate the sity .The huracane isgoing to pas toTexas poor Texas,I wont like to be there.you would likeit
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Ale, you have many many many many many many spelling mistakes
Yor article is incomplete , you have some spelling mistakes. You can add more information.
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Alejandra:
Your article is somewhat incomplete and you don't tell details about it.
You had some s.p.
Bye
Hi! Ale you wrote so mucho I LIKE VERY MUCH you have some spelling.
you had a lot of spelling mistakes and talk about the notice dont put only that the notice is fine
bye
Dear aleja:
hi I think that you are not saying nothing of the topic you only said that is a huracain, that you like the topic and that the people evacuate the city completed
you heve to completed
you have many spelling mistakes
...............bye.................
The article is incomplete and had spelling mistakes,complete it.
You mention a little bit about the hurracane you can complete it.
Is it in Beyjing?
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